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Using a semicolon between elements in a list





Is it proper usage to replace a comma in a list with a semi-colon in this situation (see details)?



Is it ever appropriate to use semicolons to separate elements in a list that follows a colon?


For example: I packed several items for my trip to Europe: shoes; shirts; boots; hats; and gloves.


I realize that S&W (4th edition, page 7) advises writers to use commas between a list's elements, but I'm seeing semicolons in a published academic journal, and I'm wondering whether usage has changed since S&W's release.



Answer



I don't have S&W with me, but I think Strunk said to use commas unless there might be some confusion as to which items belonged together.


In your example, there are only single items and no confusion. Commas are preferred.



"...trip to Europe: shoes, shirts, boot, hats, and gloves."



But note how the items are separated more cleanly by using semicolons to separate:



"...colors of European flags: blue and white; blue, white, and red; green, red, and black; blue and yellow."



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